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Beat The Blank Page Writing Exercise  

May 2004 

"Image Conscious"


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What are these "Beat the Blank Page" exercises?

The blank page never ceases to intimidate - it seems presumptuous to intrude on its perfect whiteness. As our pens hover uncertainly, it asks us who do you think you are? Easier not to begin, to go and do something less risky instead (like the washing-up) - after all, if we don't write anything, then the possibility of creating something brilliant and beautiful remains; we haven't marred that hope with the messy, no-guarantees process of writing.

If this is how you feel too, then I hope this regular exercise page will help. What follows is meant as a starting point, a way of allowing you to make that initial mark on the page, and ease you into the creative flow. These are exercises which I've found useful myself and which I've tried with different classes of students. It may seem artificial to be given a starting point, rather than letting inspiration strike, but I've always found that inspiration needs encouragement and the right conditions in which to flourish. Exercises don't always result in a finished piece of work (although they can do) but at the very least, they get you going, and fire up the brain. If you come out with even one image or word you might use later on, then the process will have been worth it.

Instructions

  • This exercise is designed to hone observation skills and to explore the power of images. The idea is to build a poem out of a series of strong images with the minimum of subjective comment. Instead juxtaposition is exploited to create mood and meaning.
  • First of all you need to 'go somewhere you've never been before'. By this I mean choose an environment that's new to you, or at least one in which you've never written. It has to be somewhere you won't be arrested for possessing a notebook and you'll be able to write fairly comfortably for half an hour. If you can choose a place you've never visited before, that can help to freshen perspective. Ideas might include a church you've passed but never gone inside; a cafe that's just opened; a park you haven't sat in before; the public gallery at a court. 
  • Once you've chosen your place, settle down with your pen and paper and begin to scrutinise your surroundings. Write as much as possible about what you can see, hear, touch, taste and smell. Write about the inanimate objects around you, then go on to observe the people in this place. You can use simile and metaphor, but avoid recording your own thoughts and feelings - concentrate instead on the external particulars of the scene around you. Try and write as fluently and un-selfconsciously as possible. Like an artist you're sketching an impression for 'working up' in the studio later. 
  • Give yourself at least half and hour in this place so you really absorb its atmosphere. Then take your writing home and put it away for a week without looking at it. 
  • After a week, come back to your notes and read them through, highlighting any images or phrases that particularly strike you. Begin to build a poem from these, restricting yourself to the material you've collected. Again, don't be tempted to comment subjectively in the poem you are creating i.e. leave out direct reference to thought and feeling. Try swapping the lines around to see what affect a different ordering has. Look out for surprising juxtapositions which might generate energy and interest.
  • Once you've arranged your lines to your satisfaction, allow yourself one subjective statement in the poem, i.e. a sentence beginning with 'I'. This might be a wish, a question, a comment - but it's important to restrict yourself to only one. Experiment with placing this line at different points in the poem.  

Purpose

  • Writing 'in situ' encourages attentiveness to the physical world which is a vital part of being a good writer.  
  • Setting writing aside for a period of time can be helpful - the writer may return to the notes with a fresh perspective and the delay in trying to create a poem can allow a subconscious engagement with the material which will deepen the end result.
  • The discipline of using only sensory impressions to build a poem, rather than subjective comment, is a useful way of sensitising the writer to the power of juxtaposition; the placing of two images together can generate tension and meaning more effectively and economically than several lines of explanation. Sometimes that's all the writer needs to make their point without needing to clarify or justify. It also gives the reader some work to do which can ultimately make for a more satisfying read.  

Example Poem

Here are a couple of examples which demonstrate the effectiveness of this pared-down technique. They are both models of restraint and control, building tone and atmosphere simply through their use of imagery. The poem by James Wright is the inspiration behind allowing one subjective statement - his comes at the end of the poem and transforms what we've just read with its beautiful bleakness, making us reinterpret the rest of the poem in the light, or darkness, of this final line.

Lying in a Hammock at William Duffy's Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota

Over my head, I see the bronze butterfly,
Asleep on the black trunk,
Blowing like a leaf in green shadow.
Down the ravine behind the empty house,
The cowbells follow one another
Into the distances of the afternoon.
To my right,
In a field of sunlight between two pines,
The droppings of last year's horses
Blaze up into golden stones.
I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes on.
A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home.
I have wasted my life.

James Wright

Summer

At evening, the sound of the cuckoo
Stops in the wood.
The grain bends lower,
The red poppy.

Black thunderclouds bloom
Above the hill.
The ancient song of the cricket
Fades off into the fields.

The leaves of the chestnut
Tree stir no more.
Upon the spiral staircase
Your dress rustles.

One silent candle shines
In the dark room;
A silvery hand
Extinguishes it;

No wind, no stars. Night.

Georg Trakl
Translated by Robert Genier

 

Send Me Your Work !

If you have enjoyed this exercise, send me your poems - each month I will put up the best pieces I've received inspired by the previous month's exercise. Please mark your e-mail 'Image Conscious'.

Thank you to Kirsty Bennett for sending me her poem 'This day' inspired by this exercise. I enjoyed reading it and I'm sure others will too.

Other poems selected from those submitted by readers can be found on the Submitted Poems page.


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