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Beat The Blank Page
Writing Exercise
May
2004
"Image
Conscious"
An Example Poem
Submitted Work For This
Exercise
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What are these "Beat the Blank Page"
exercises?
The blank page never ceases to intimidate - it seems
presumptuous to intrude on its perfect whiteness. As our pens hover
uncertainly, it asks us who do you think you are? Easier not to
begin, to go and do something less risky instead (like the washing-up) -
after all, if we don't write anything, then the possibility of creating
something brilliant and beautiful remains; we haven't marred that hope
with the messy, no-guarantees process of writing.
If this is how you feel too, then I hope this regular
exercise page will help. What follows is meant as a starting point, a way
of allowing you to make that initial mark on the page, and ease you into
the creative flow. These are exercises which I've found useful myself and
which I've tried with different classes of students. It may seem
artificial to be given a starting point, rather than letting inspiration
strike, but I've always found that inspiration needs encouragement and the
right conditions in which to flourish. Exercises don't always result in a
finished piece of work (although they can do) but at the very least, they
get you going, and fire up the brain. If you come out with even one image
or word you might use later on, then the process will have been worth it.
Instructions
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This
exercise is designed to hone observation skills and to explore the power
of images. The idea is to build a poem out of a series of strong
images
with the minimum of subjective comment. Instead juxtaposition is
exploited to create mood and meaning.
- First of all you need to 'go somewhere you've
never been before'. By this I mean choose an environment
that's new to you, or at least one in which you've never written. It has to be somewhere
you won't be arrested for possessing a notebook and you'll be able to write fairly comfortably
for half an hour. If you can choose a place you've never visited before, that can
help to freshen perspective. Ideas might include a church you've passed but never
gone inside; a cafe that's just opened; a park you haven't sat
in before; the public gallery at a court.
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Once you've chosen your place, settle down with your
pen and paper and begin to scrutinise your surroundings. Write as much as possible
about what you can see, hear, touch, taste and smell. Write about the inanimate
objects around you, then go on to observe the people in this
place. You can use simile and metaphor, but
avoid recording your own thoughts and feelings - concentrate instead on
the external particulars of the scene around you. Try and write as fluently and
un-selfconsciously as possible. Like an artist you're sketching an impression for 'working
up' in the studio later.
- Give yourself at least half and hour in this
place so you really absorb its atmosphere. Then take your writing
home and put it away for a week without looking at it.
- After a week, come back to your notes and read
them through, highlighting any images or phrases that particularly
strike you. Begin to build a poem from these, restricting yourself to the material
you've collected. Again, don't be tempted to comment subjectively in the poem
you are creating i.e. leave out direct reference to thought and feeling. Try swapping
the lines around to see what affect a different ordering has.
Look out for surprising juxtapositions which might generate energy and interest.
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Once
you've arranged your lines to your satisfaction, allow yourself one
subjective statement in the poem, i.e. a sentence beginning with 'I'.
This might
be a wish, a question, a comment - but
it's important to restrict yourself to only one. Experiment with placing this
line at different points in the poem.
Purpose
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Writing 'in situ' encourages attentiveness to the physical world which
is a vital part of being a good writer.
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Setting
writing aside for a period of time can be helpful -
the writer may return to the notes with a
fresh perspective and the delay in trying to create a poem can allow
a subconscious engagement with the material which will deepen the end
result.
- The
discipline of using only sensory impressions to build a poem,
rather than subjective comment, is a useful way of sensitising the
writer to the power of juxtaposition; the placing of two images together
can generate tension and meaning more effectively and economically than
several lines of explanation. Sometimes that's all the writer needs to make their point without needing to
clarify or justify. It also gives the reader some work to do
which can ultimately make for a more satisfying read.
Example Poem
Here are a couple of examples which demonstrate
the effectiveness of this pared-down technique. They are both models of restraint and control, building tone and
atmosphere simply through their use of imagery. The poem by James Wright is the inspiration
behind allowing one subjective statement - his comes at the end of the poem and transforms what we've just
read with its beautiful bleakness, making us reinterpret the rest of the poem
in the light, or darkness, of this final line.
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Lying in a Hammock
at William Duffy's Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota
Over my head, I see the bronze
butterfly, Asleep on the black trunk,
Blowing like a
leaf in green shadow. Down the ravine behind the empty
house, The cowbells follow one another Into the distances of
the afternoon.
To my right, In a field of sunlight between
two pines, The droppings of last year's horses Blaze up into
golden stones. I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes
on. A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home. I have
wasted my
life.
James
Wright
Summer
At evening, the sound of the cuckoo Stops in the
wood. The grain bends lower, The red poppy.
Black thunderclouds bloom Above the hill. The ancient
song of the cricket Fades off into the fields.
The leaves of the chestnut Tree stir no more. Upon the
spiral staircase Your dress rustles.
One silent candle shines In the dark room; A silvery
hand Extinguishes it;
No wind, no stars. Night.
Georg Trakl Translated by Robert
Genier
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Send Me Your Work !
If you have enjoyed this exercise, send
me your poems - each month I will
put up the best pieces I've received inspired by the previous
month's exercise. Please mark your e-mail 'Image Conscious'.
Thank you to Kirsty Bennett for sending me her
poem 'This day' inspired by this
exercise. I enjoyed reading it and I'm sure others will
too.
Other poems selected from those submitted by readers
can be found on the Submitted Poems
page.
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