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Beat The Blank Page Writing Exercise  

February 2004 

"Talking to Yourself "


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Instructions

  • Start by digging out an old photograph - this can be of yourself, a friend, a member of your family or a complete stranger - there are lots of fascinating old photos to be had in junk shops if you keep a look out. Whatever you choose, it's important to have the picture in front of you. Also, photos from the more distant past tend to work better than recent pictures as they allow greater room for the imagination.
  • Start by describing the photograph, studying it as intently as possible. The idea is to convey the essence of the picture to a reader who won't have the photograph in front of them. This is a good exercise in close description and should be as vivid as possible, capturing the atmosphere and spirit of the picture as well as its physical contents. Don't neglect the photo as an object itself at this point - its size, its condition, where you found it etc.
  • Once you've done this, imagine what isn't in the photo - what lies beyond the frame? This begins to open up the photograph to imaginative enquiry.
  • Now put yourself in the subject of the photograph's shoes - what were they experiencing as the picture was taken? At this stage you could bring in the other senses. What could the subject hear and touch and smell as well as see? What were their emotions at the time of the picture being taken?
  • Finally, begin a dialogue with the person in the photograph. By this I mean literally start to ask the subject questions. Imagine how they might reply to you. The earlier stages of the exercise are a preparation for this interaction - I hope by the time you reach this stage you will have developed an emotional relationship with the picture and the person in it and this will generate an intensity in the writing.
  • All of this material may make it into a poem or perhaps you'll find one aspect of it more interesting/successful and choose to focus on this.

Purpose

  • Photographs have long been recognised as good starting points for writing - whether for fiction or poetry. Because they capture a moment in time they are both evocative and precise, qualities which are valuable in writing.  
  • Using dialogue in poetry can be an arresting technique adding drama and movement - if you feel your writing is becoming too static, too reliant on description, then this exercise might open up other possibilities.  

Example Poem

 

Photograph of My Father in
His Twenty-Second Year

October. Here in this dank, unfamiliar kitchen
I study my father's embarrassed young man's face.
Sheepish grin, he holds in one hand a string
of spiny yellow perch, in the other
a bottle of Carlsbad beer.

In jeans and denim shirt, he leans
against the front fender of a 1934 Ford.
He would like to pose bluff and hearty for his posterity,
wear his old hat cocked over his ear.
All his life my father wanted to be bold.

But the eyes give him away, and the hands
that limply offer the string of dead perch
and the bottle of beer. Father, I love you,
yet how can I say thank you, I who can't hold my liquor either,
and don't even know the places to fish?

by Raymond Carver

 
Submitted Work For This Exercise
 
Send me your work! - I will put up the best pieces I've received inspired by each exercise. Please mark your e-mail 'Talking to Yourself'.
 
Thank you to Mat Riches for sending me his poem 'Aperture' inspired by this exercise and to David Keyworth for his poem 'Postcard of Anna, at Sigmund's Side'. I enjoyed reading both of them and I'm sure others will too.
 
Other poems selected from those submitted by readers can be found on the Submitted Poems page 


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